Well Sarah made a comment stating that maybe the play should be more of a tragedy...
So I was thinking...
In ACT V, Francesco has an assassination attempt made on his life, but instead of him getting hurt, Filippa, knowing about the attempt, saves Francesco and dies doing so.
And from that, Francesco realizes he needs to change and becomes a better ruler.
I don't really want everyone to die at the end, but maybe having Filippa die will be more intense and more heart-wrenching than just having Francesco be badly injured.
Hey rachel!
ReplyDeleteI have a rough draft of the acts up, if you wanna take a look!
http://zittingsarah232.blogspot.com/2012/03/adding-some-levity.html